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You let out a quiet gasp as you saw Elizabeta and Gilbert kiss. Your feet just automatically moved. You ran with tears coming out of your eyes, you didn't care where you were going, as long as you were far away from him.


~~FLASHBACK~~


The duo, from the Bad Touch Trio, Francis and Antonio were dragging you to who knows where.

You tried getting away, but both of them got a hold of your arms.

They stopped in front of the boy's locker and you gave them both a confused glance. They smirked and shoved you inside, closing it.

You quickly got up and banged on the door.

"P-Please let me out!" you begged but you heard nothing in response.

You sobbed quietly and collapsed on the floor. You were really scared of being alone by yourself. You didn't like it. It made you feel like no one cared about your existence. Well, even if you were surrounded by people, no one would notice you anyway. You were really shy and didn't like attention that much, but being around people you knew made you feel a little comfortable and safe.

You suddenly heard footsteps behind you. Every step made your heart beat faster. You were scared. What if it was a bully who might torture or worse, what if it was a murderer or a kidnapper? The thought made you tremble in fear. You put your hands on your head and cried.
You felt a hand on your shoulder and you started screaming, "Please don't hurt me!" multiple times until you heard the stranger speak.

"_____, it's the awesome me." You ceased your crying and looked over your shoulder to see Gilbert. You and Gilbert weren't that close but he would always cheer you up when you were down and spend some time with you when you're alone by yourself. And you consider him as your friend.

New tears started forming your eyes. You were so scared and frightened and you felt like hugging him, but you were too shy. Gilbert must have noticed this and hugged you. You felt so safe wrapped around his arms and it made your stomach boil. You grip his uniform and buried your face on his shoulder and he whispered sweet things to calm you down.

He might be egoistic and loud but he's really sweet and gentle when he wants to be. Those are the things you really like about him. You still haven't even notice that you were in love with him though.

You stopped crying and pulled away, wiping the remaining tears in your eyes. Gilbert lifted your chin up and wiped them with his sleeve. You felt your face heat up and you quickly look away.

Gilbert let out his trademark laugh and patted your head.

"I guess Antonio und Francis vas a little hard on you." He said with a smile.

"Y-You mean, you told them to?" you ask furrowing your brows.

"Y-Yeah, I vanted to talk to you alone." He said scratching his neck.

"You could have just said so." You mumbled.


"……….."


There was an awkward silence and you were the first to break it.

"S-So, why did you bring me h-here? And why does it have to be in the boy's locker room?" You mumbled the last part quietly.

"I vant to tell you somezthing ______."

He moved closer to you, your face were inches away. You flushed red and moved away but he stopped you by cupping your face, making you look him in the eyes.

You're not really comfortable when it comes to physical contact.

"G-Gilb-bert, y-your too clo-"

He closed the gap between you two by pressing his lips against yours. You were staying still for a moment, but eventually kissed back.

You pulled away first to regain your breath. It felt like you two were kissing.

"_____."

You glance at the albino (Who's not so albino now cause of so much red on his face) and you had to admit, he looked really adorable when he blushed like that.

"I-Ich liebe dich."

You gasped and felt a tear ran down your cheek.

Meanwhile, Gilbert felt really stresses. He was starting to regret confessing to you because you'd been quiet for quite some time now.

The silence was making him uneasy so he spoke.

"______, if you don't feel the same way I-"

You hugged him and buried your face on his shirt.

"I-I love you too Gil." You whispered.

He smiled and snaked his arms around you and kissed your forehead.

"Meet me at the gate after school _____. I have something to give you." He whispered.


~~END OF FLASHBACK~~


You stopped running when you felt something wet hit your cheek other than tears. It felt cold. You look up and water poured down. It was raining. You were so busy running away that you forgot that there would be a storm coming.

You look around and noticed that this place didn't look like your usual neighborhood. You were lost. You sighed and kept walking with your head down. It's better than standing around and doing nothing. You didn't like staying in one place for too long so walking is kind of your habit and it helps you clear your mind like your taking a therapy.

While walking, you felt your head starting to ache and your body felt like it was on fire.

You suddenly bumped into something or someone. You looked up and saw a tall blonde. You recognized him somewhere but you can't seem to see his face. Your vision became blurry and you fainted.


~~LUDWIG'S P.O.V. ~~


I was heading home with some groceries when I suddenly felt someone bump into me. I turned around and saw ______ with a dull look on her face und she was soaked to the bone, so I tried cheering her up.

"Hallo ______." I exclaimed in my native language then, she suddenly fainted. Luckily I caught her in time. I put a hand on her forehead, und mein gott she was burning up.

I didn't know where she lives, so I had to take her home with me.

When I got home, I laid ______ on the couch und put the groceries on the kitchen table. I had so much work to do but ______ had to come first. I wish mein bruder was here to help.

I got a towel and some clothes from my room then went to _____'s side. I felt her forehead again and her temperature was rising.

I had to change her clothes before it got worst but, how am I supposed to do it? I blushed at the thought. I shook my head vigorously. I sighed and decided to wake up Monika*.

I went to her room and shook her body.

"Schwester, vake up." She jerked around then sat up.

"What is it bruder?" she ask rubbing her eye.

"Can you do me a favor?"


~~~


"I'm finished bruder." Monika said as she stepped inside the kitchen where Ludwig was cooking dinner.

"Ja, danke Schwester." He said as he set the food on the table.

"Where's Gilbert? I thought he'd be home by now." She said as she sat down.

"Maybe he's out drinking again." Ludwig said as he sat down on his chair and took a sip of his coffee.

"Bruder, that girl you just brought, isn't she the one Gilbert likes?" she asked as she took a bite of her food.

"Now zhat you mention, I zhink she iz. But I thought-"

Ludwig was interrupted by a loud noise. It came from the living room. Both Germans ran to the living room to see Gilbert soaked wet.

"Sorry I'm late Lud-" he stopped when he saw you sleeping on the couch.

"__-_____, wha-what is she doing here?" he ask pointing at your sleeping form.

"I'll tell you later but first, go get change before you get zick too." Ludwig commanded.


~~~


"Vhere vere you Bruder?!" Ludwig yelled at the albino who was sulking on his bed.

"I was, waiting for her." He said bluntly.

"You mean _____?"

Gilbert nodded.

Ludwig sighed and sat beside his brother.

"Tell me vhat happened."

"After I confessed to her, I told her to meet me outside the gate but she never came."

Gilbert said and buried his face on his Prussian flag pillow.

Ludwig felt sorry for his brother. He knew how much his brother liked ______. But something wasn't right; ______ would never ignore a request from anyone. Something must have made her upset. Then again, Gilbert always made people upset without him knowing it. Ludwig sighed and put a hand on his brother's shoulder.

"It's okay bruder. You can talk to her in the morning." He said and left.

Ludwig went back to the living room to see Monika holding a thermometer.

"How is she schwester?" he asked.

"Her fever is starting to go down. She'll be okay in the morning." She said.

"Zhat's good. Thank you for helping me."

"Anytime bruder. Gute Nacht." She said and gave his brother a good night kiss on the cheek.

"Gute Nacht schwester."

After Monika left, Ludwig pulled the blanket over your shoulder and sat on the floor beside you and quickly fell asleep himself.

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Hurrdurr, I checked over it~!
You don't have many mistakes, and your language is great! ^^
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Blue-Divine said the following:

You let out a quiet gasp as you saw Elizabeta and Gilbert kissed. Your feet just automatically moved. You ran with tears coming out of your eyes, you didn't care where to go as long as you're far away from him.


~~FLASHBACK~~


The duo, from the Bad Touch Trio, Francis and Antonio were dragging you to who knows where.

You tried getting away but both of them got a hold of your arms.

They stopped in front of the boy's locker and you gave them both a confused glance. They smirked and shoved you inside, closing it.

You quickly got up and banged on the door.

"P-Please let me out!" you begged but you heard nothing in response.

You sob quietly and collapsed on the floor. You're really scared of being alone by yourself. You didn't like it. It made you feel like no one cares about your existence. Well, even if you were surrounded by people no one will notice you anyway. You were really shy and don't like attention that much but being around people you knew makes you feel a little comfortable and safe.

You suddenly heard footsteps behind you. Every step made your heart beat faster. You were scared. What if it was a bully who might torture or worse, what if it was a murderer or a kidnapper. The thought made you tremble in fear. You put your hands on your head and cried.
You felt a hand on your shoulder and you started screaming, "Please don't hurt me!" multiple times until you heard the stranger speak.

"_____, it's the awesome me." You ceased your crying and look over your shoulder to see Gilbert. You and Gilbert weren't that close but he would always cheer you up when you're down and spend some time with you when you're alone by yourself. And you consider him as your friend.

New tears started forming your eyes. You were so scared and frightened and you felt like hugging him, but you were too shy. Gilbert must have noticed this and hugged you. You felt so safe wrapped around his arms and it made your stomach boil. You grip his uniform and buried your face on his shoulder and he whispered sweet things to calm you down.

He might be egoistic and loud but he's really sweet and gentle when he wants to be. Those are the things you really like about him. You still haven't even notice that you were in love with him though.

You stopped crying and pulled away, wiping the remaining tears in your eyes. Gilbert lifted your chin up and wiped them with his sleeve. You felt your face heat up and you quickly look away.

Gilbert let out his trademark laugh and patted your head.

"I guess Antonio und Francis vas a little hard on you." He said with a smile.

"Y-You mean, you told them to?" you ask furrowing your brows.

"Y-Yeah, I vanted to talk to you alone." He said scratching his neck.

"You could have just said so." You mumbled.


"……….."


There was an awkward silence and you were the first to break it.

"S-So, why did you bring me h-here? And why does it have to be in the boy's locker room." You mumbled the last part quietly.

"I vant to tell you somezthing ______."

He moved closer to you, your face were inches away. You flushed red and moved away but he stopped you by cupping your face, making you look him in the eyes.

You're not really comfortable when it comes to physical contact.

"G-Gilb-bert, y-your too clo-"

He closed the gap between you two by pressing his lips against yours. You were staying still for a moment, but eventually kissed back.

You pulled away first to regain your breath. It felt like you two were kissing.

"_____."

You glance at the albino who's not so albino now cause of so much red on his face. You got to admit, he looked really adorable when he blushes like that.

"I-Ich liebe dich."

You gasp and felt a tear ran down your cheek.

Meanwhile, Gilbert felt really stress. He was starting to regret confessing to you because you've been quiet for quite some time now.

The silence was making him uneasy so he spoke.

"______, if you don't feel the same way I-"

You hugged him and buried your face on his shirt.

"I-I love you too Gil." You whispered.

He smiled and snaked his arms around you and kissed your forehead.

"Meet me at the gate after school _____. I have something to give you." He whispered.


~~END OF FLASHBACK~~


You stopped running when you felt something wet hit your cheek other than tears. It felt cold. You look up and water poured down. It was raining. You were so busy running away that you forgot that there would be a storm coming.

You look around and noticed that this place didn't look like your usual neighborhood. You were lost. You sighed and kept walking with your head down. It's better than standing around and doing nothing. You didn't like staying in one place for too long so walking is kind of your habit and it helps you clear your mind like your taking a therapy.

While walking, you felt your head starting to ache and your body felt like it was on fire.

You suddenly bumped into something or someone. You looked up and saw a tall blonde. You recognized him somewhere but you can't seem to see his face. Your vision became blurry and you fainted.


~~LUDWIG'S P.O.V. ~~


I was heading home with some groceries when I suddenly felt someone bumped behind me. I turned around and saw ______ with a dull look on her face und she was soaked to the bone so I tried cheering her up.

"Hallo ______." I exclaimed in my native language then, she suddenly fainted. Luckily I caught her in time. I put a hand on her forehead, und mein gott she was burning up.

I didn't know where she lives, so I had to take her home with me.

When I got home, I laid ______ on the couch und put the groceries on the kitchen table. I had so much work to do but ______ had to come first. I wish mein bruder was here to help.

I got a towel and some clothes from my room then went to _____'s side. I felt her forehead again and her temperature was rising.

I have to change her clothes before it gets worst but, how am I supposed to do it? I blushed at the thought. I shook my head vigorously. I sighed and decided to wake up Monika*.

I went to her room and shook her body.

"Schwester, vake up." She jerked around then sat up.

"What is it bruder?" she ask rubbing her eye.

"Can you do me a favor?"


~~~


"I'm finished bruder." Monika said as she stepped inside the kitchen where Ludwig was cooking dinner.

"Ja, danke Schwester." He said as he set the food on the table.

"Where's Gilbert? I thought he'd be home by now." She said as she sat down.

"Maybe he's out drinking again." Ludwig said as he sat down on his chair and took a sip of his coffee.

"Bruder, that girl you just brought, isn't she the one Gilbert likes?" she asked as she took a bite of her food.

"Now zhat you mention, I zhink she iz. But I thought-"

Ludwig was interrupted by a loud noise. It came from the living room. Both Germans ran to the living room to see Gilbert soaked wet.

"Sorry I'm late Lud-" he stopped when he saw you sleeping on the couch.

"__-_____, wha-what is she doing here?" he ask pointing at your sleeping form.

"I'll tell you later but first, go get change before you get zick too." Ludwig commanded.


~~~


"Vhere vere you Bruder?!" Ludwig yelled at the albino who was sulking on his bed.

"I was, waiting for her." He said bluntly.

"You mean _____?"

Gilbert nodded.

Ludwig sighed and sat beside his brother.

"Tell me vhat happened."

"After I confessed to her, I told her to meet me outside the gate but she never came."

Gilbert said and buried his face on his Prussian flag pillow.

Ludwig felt sorry for his brother. He knew how much his brother liked ______. But something wasn't right; ______ would never ignore a request from anyone. Something must have made her upset. Then again, Gilbert always made people upset without him knowing it. Ludwig sighed and put a hand on his brother's shoulder.

"It's okay bruder. You can talk to her in the morning." He said and left.

Ludwig went back to the living room to see Monika holding a thermometer.

"How is she schwester?" he asked.

"Her fever is starting to go down. She'll be okay in the morning." She said.

"Zhat's good. Thank you for helping me."

"Anytime bruder. Gute Nacht." She said and gave his brother a good night kiss on the cheek.

"Gute Nacht schwester."

After Monika left, Ludwig pulled the blanket over your shoulder and sat on the floor beside you and quickly fell asleep himself.
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Blueboxgirl19 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Monika is my name in german class
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:iconprussiablushplz: :iconsadfaceplz:
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ummmm. you might want to read this all the way though again, one your done just know other people do it too (<--me)
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LB8888 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012
Blushing prussia? .... :iconnosebleedplz:
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i know right yuno
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nice :squee:
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next chapter??
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I'll be working on it as soon as i have time :D
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sweet~!
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thank u :hug
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